OSP assessment: Learner response
1) Type up your feedback in full (you don't need to write the mark and grade if you want to keep this confidential). WWW: Some very clear and well argued points EBI: Q2 needs developing - a conclusion, more focus on the question (Hesmondhalgh) and consideration of Shirky as another theorist 2) Read the whole mark scheme for this assessment carefully . Identify three specific aspects from Figure 1 (the Google Home advert) that you could have mentioned in your answer (e.g. selection of image, framing and focus, colour, text etc.) Preferred - Coloured pencils and paint bottle represent creativity and ideal family life (playing with children) Oppositional - Repetition of 'home' may disturb readers, as it suggests that nowhere is safe from the influence of multinational conglomerates such as Google Negotiated - The speaker is a useful product despite the fact that it may exploit user data for monetary gain 3) Now use the mark scheme to i dentify three potential points that